UC知道英文好滴...进进进
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帮我检查一下这篇文章有没错...think!>
Hi everyone!My name is vic.My number is 29.today is Thursday.the weather is sunny .
In the futurn ,I think I will become a doctor.if I become a docror.I will work will patients.And I will help a lot of people.So I will be happy.But if I become a doctor.I will be busy and hard.But I did not fear.
Maybe I will become a player.if I become a player.I will be rich and famous.But if I become a player .People will watch me all the time and follow me everywhere.But I don't like it.
So I think I will be a doctor
OK! Who can answer my questions?
questions1:What will happen if I become a doctor?
questions2:What will I do?!
是演讲稿来滴..帮我找找有没错误...think!
"but i am not fear at all"干嘛要加at all
Hi everyone!My name is vic.My number is 29.today is Thursday.the weather is sunny .
In the futurn ,I think I will become a doctor.if I become a docror.I will work will patients.And I will help a lot of people.So I will be happy.But if I become a doctor.I will be busy and hard.But I did not fear.
Maybe I will become a player.if I become a player.I will be rich and famous.But if I become a player .People will watch me all the time and follow me everywhere.But I don't like it.
So I think I will be a doctor
OK! Who can answer my questions?
questions1:What will happen if I become a doctor?
questions2:What will I do?!
是演讲稿来滴..帮我找找有没错误...think!
"but i am not fear at all"干嘛要加at all
In the futurn-in the future
I will work will patients-I will work with patience / I will work patiently.
So I will be happy-That will make me happy.
But if I become a doctor,but删掉
but i did not fear-However, I won't be afraid.（but i am not fear at all也不对）
But if I become a player. People will 把这辆句话连起来but if I become a player,people will...
But I don't like it -I don't like that.
提个小小建议，太多的will 和 but 有的时候不要乱用。
错误futurn .....future
will.........with
But I did not fear .....but i am not fear at all