UC知道帮我改一下英语面试用的回答～送80悬赏分，好的话会追加！！
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ABOUT HOME AND FAMILY
My family is a big family,there are six members in my family including myself.In my family there are my parents,a big sister and an younger sister,an younger brother and me.My father is fifty years old and he is a business man.He is real homely person.My mother is fifty years old,same with my father,she manages the company with my father.My two sisters have very similar personality,they are very careful and quiet.My younger brother is a junior school student and he is very naughty.because all of my family members have a variety of characters,we have a lot of funny episodes.My family is always very lively.I think my family is the happiest and most interesting one in the world!
ABOUT FUTURE
I want to be an interpreter in the future.I can speak Korean and Chinese quite fluently now and through the 4 years of study in ** University's department of English.I believe my English will has a great improvement.After graduation, I want to study in
My family is a big family,there are six members in my family including myself.In my family there are my parents,a big sister and an younger sister,an younger brother and me.My father is fifty years old and he is a business man.He is real homely person.My mother is fifty years old,same with my father,she manages the company with my father.My two sisters have very similar personality,they are very careful and quiet.My younger brother is a junior school student and he is very naughty.because all of my family members have a variety of characters,we have a lot of funny episodes.My family is always very lively.I think my family is the happiest and most interesting one in the world!
ABOUT FUTURE
I want to be an interpreter in the future.I can speak Korean and Chinese quite fluently now and through the 4 years of study in ** University's department of English.I believe my English will has a great improvement.After graduation, I want to study in
很多句子没有明白，关键不知道你的中文要表达什麽什麽意思的
有一个明显的地方需要改一下：a big sister应该是an elder sister
还有就是如果是一句句子的话，后半句之前一定要有连词，诸如and之类的
祝成功！
有一个地方需要改一下：a big sister应该是an elder sister不然有点中国式英语