急需一篇英语评论

People have become more realistic on salary and job opportunities nowadays. As a result, the view that one should grab a good job offer as early as he can and learn relevant knowledge later has been well supported. However, I hold the opposite opinion that we should keep on our way in study as far as possible.

The main concern of the people who take a job too early is that it usually becomes rather difficult for them to step further in self development. One of the reasons is that they have missed the best learning and remembering period, which often lies in one’s twenties. Another possible factor is they have neither energy nor proper mood to sit down and sank into reading a thick textbook in the evening of a busy workday. Therefore, for those who are longing for final success in their careers, especially in scientific and high-tech fields, the best pathway is staying in campus and focusing all their attention in study.

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