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58，this was my average mark of English in senior high school. 105, this was my English mark of university entrance examination. To me, it was a miracle.
In my senior high school, my English was very poor. Because of poor, I did not like. I never recited words; I never read any English article; I even never listened English. Sometimes, I would sleep on the English class. I hated English. I hated it.
However, even I did not like it; even my English was poor. I still had a dream. I dreamed that one day, I could speak fluent English with native speaker; I dreamed that I could understand English news on TV; I dreamed that one day, I could read Jane Austen in English. But it was a dream. It never comes true.
One day, my friend said to me:” I want to work hard, I want to get high mark of English, I want to be a miracle.”
“To be a miracle, can I “I asked myself, “Maybe I can.”
From that day, l learned English in a positive way. l listened English radio; l listened it

58，this was my average mark of English in senior high school. 105, this was my English mark of university entrance examination. To me, it was a miracle.
Duting my senior highschool years, my English was very poor. Because of that, I did not like English. I never memorized any words; I never read any English articles; I never listened to English CDs. Sometimes, I would sleep during English classes. I hated English. I hated it.
However, even though I did not like it; even though my English was poor, I still had a dream. I dreamed that one day, I could speak fluent English with native speakers; I dreamed that I could understand English news on TV; I dreamed that one day, I could read Jane Austen in English. But it was a dream. It would never come true.
One day, my friend said to me:” I want to work hard, I want to get high marks in English, I want to be a miracle.”
“Can I be a miracle? “I asked myself, “Maybe I can.”
From that day on, l studied English in