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1 不算题目的第二行，要改成He got on the train,他上了火车。
2 不算题目的第二行，要改成He wanted to go to the toilet,我觉得WC不算常用，在英语应用中。
3 "he threw the bread to the table"最好用“put "这个短语，即"he put the bread on the table"
4 "he saw a man was sat near him and was eating bread."像“see"这种感官动词后面可应直接用动词ing形式，改成"he saw a man sitting near his seat and eating his bread."
5 结尾的“land"建议换成"floor",land一般译为大陆，太正式了一点。

怎么样？我尽力了～～

The bread
On one morning,Mr Smith wanted to visit his friend living in a small town. So,he took the train and bought some bread to eat. He got into train and found a sit. At the same time,he wanted to go to washroom .So,he threw the bread to the table and went to washroon.When he came back,he saw a man was sat near him and was eating bread.He was angry and thought,"why does he eat my bread ?"So,he took the bread out of the man's hand and ate it.The man was angry,"why do you eat my bre