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Dear Mr. Director：
I have learned that you are employing a Marketing Clerk. I am very much interested in the position.
I graduated from the Yanbian University with a bachelor degree and I major in International economic and trade. I studied hard and took part in many campaigns and society practice to develop myself in all-round when I was at school. I cultivated the ability of logical analysis and operational by joining many campaigns. I have learned the importance of teams spirit and how to communicate with others, how to work well with others, how to be a leader from these experiences. All this made me full of confidence to work in future.
Dear Mr. Director：
I have learned that you are employing a Marketing Clerk. I am very much interested in the position.
I graduated from the Yanbian University with a bachelor degree and I major in International economic and trade. I studied hard and took part in many campaigns and society practice to develop myself in all-round when I was at school. I cultivated the ability of logical analysis and operational by joining many campaigns. I have learned the importance of teams spirit and how to communicate with others, how to work well with others, how to be a leader from these experiences. All this made me full of confidence to work in future.
是发邮箱吗？只是用词和一些小毛病，大的句法就不改了，能传达大意就行
Dear Mr. Director：
I have learned that you are employing a Marketing Clerk. I am very much interested in the job.
I graduated from the Yanbian University with a bachelor degree and I majored in International economic and trade. I studied hard and paticipated many campaigns and society practice to develop myself in all-round . I cultivated the ability of logical analysis and operational by joining many campaigns. I have learned the importance of teams spirit and how to communicate with others, how to work well with others, how to be a leader from these experiences. All this made me full of confidence to work in future.