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Today is the first day i am in my dream college. I am so excited as i have become the major in the beginning of the day. As the major, i must face a lot of things that i never experienced. I have given up a lot of things in order to get into this college. As a conclusion, I will appreciate the following four years in this college and i will get what i want when i graduate.

Today is my first day of college. I am very excited，for the first thing that made me happy was I was selected as class monitor. I know I will have to face things I have never experienced. In order to go to college , I gave up a lot of personal interests and hobbies. I am fully aware how much a college means to me and I would treasure these four valuable years. I am expecting a great many things to learn before I graduate.

I feel so excited that today is my first day in college.
From today on, i am a grown-up. I will face much challenges that i have never experienced. I gave up lots of my interest