英文翻译 请教一句话

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/05 21:04:02
“如果我一旦听说你伤害他,我会回来的,记住!”

下面是我自己的翻译 如果有错误请指出谢谢!

“If I ever heard you hurt him, I will back! remember that!”

ever 后面是不是应该写hear 而不是 heard

hear

我会翻成
I will be back as I hear of your hurting him. Remember!

if i ever have heard you hurt him!i will come back!

一旦可以说:at once 或者once,而不应该用ever.

应该是I will be back as soon as I hear that you hurt him.Remember!