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My ideal life
I am a very simple person, I would have preferred to see a living and nothing to do with the success of applause, position and nothing to do with money, simply left to their own life, my life Like, I feel that life is the highest state of happy.
I like food, for example, dessert, Ice Cream, hot and spicy, I enjoy eating ice cream in winter, hot and spicy food during the summer. Although a dilemma, but I will be happy.
I love travel, I love shopping, I have tried to go to the street one day, eat or drink a little tired and do not enjoy very much. I love the pursuit of love.
I have a special love, is to study the constellation, Sagittarius I, who love freedom, love to make friends, sometimes unrealistic, so often there will be a friend to help match analysis of the constellation, I will never, but not all Believe me, is to look at the feelings of the fate of them.
I do not ask for much for the career, but I do not want to be a housewife, I just

My ideal life
I am a very simple person. I would prefer to live a simple life, and have nothing to do with applause of success, rank or money. A life like this, I think is the highest level of happiness.
I enjoy food, for example, dessert, ice cream, hot and spicy. I like eating ice cream in winter, hot and spicy in summer. It is a dilemma, but I am happy with it.
I love traveling and shopping. I(这句不明白)I love the pursuit of love.
I have a big hobby, which is to recognize the constellations. Sagittarius I, which means love for freedom, to make friends, even though sometimes unrealistic.(这句不明白)I will never, although not all others believe me, look at the feelings of their fate(这句不明白,所以不知道对不对).
I do not ask for much of the career, but I do not want to be a housewife either. I want to have a stable income, work from 9 am to 5 pm, and spend time with the family(这句不明白,所以不知道对不对).
I am a lazy person, I hope that my life is simple. I want to love other people, h