求英语口语高手

my name is HuoYan Wu,i'm a native.I graduated from JiangHan university .I'm interested in computer technology since my childhood, but i missed the chance to enter the department of computer science for my bad performance in the entrance test to senior high school. Therefore i have to study medicine. After graduation,i give up my job in hospital, and come to think bank following my interest.I think it's my best choice since i come into university .i always dreamed of owning an IT company. No matter how hard the road is ,i believe i would go on until the dream comes true.
well ,in my spare time ,i like playing basketball, playing computer games and chinese chess. also english is my favorate.i go to english corner to practise my oral english every Thursday ,and write compositions to improve my written ability .but i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying. ok, that is all,thank you for your attention.
将你的介绍做了一些小的修改，还有一些地方，我不太领会，所以未做改动。如果不合适的话