帮忙看看这短语有什么问题
来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/28 11:28:23
Then we played the risk game, walked around, took pictures, and have a lot of fun time.
had
had
"the risk game" 指的是那个叫"Risk"的桌面游戏么?如果是的话,就可以直接说,we played Risk. 如果不是的话,是不是真心话大冒险呢?那个叫"Truth or Dare", We played Truth or Dare.
如果是我的话,我会这么写:
We had a lot of fun. We played Risk (or Truth or Dare), then strolled around, and took a lot of pictures.
插入的walked around显得很突兀,后面的time应去掉。
funny time
played 是过去时,后面得have 又是现在时,
时态混乱啊
这句子有点象并列结构,所以have应用had.还有risk前,为什么要有the呢?risk又不是最高级