英语高手进。。高手速度帮忙！~急！！

作文题目
假如你是李华！著名球星贝克汉姆将来你所居住的城市举行“人人上大学，世界更和谐”的扶贫义寒，现正招募为义赛服务的志愿者，你希望成为其中一员：请按要求用英语给义赛组委会写一封信，表达你的意愿。1:个人基本情况：性别，年龄等 2：个人条件：英语很好，爱好体育，善于交往，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况等。 3：承诺：将会提供最佳服务

一百字左右 在先等。。急！！！
二、改错 每句有一个错误的地方
1:After i finished the school,i began to look for work.
2：until now several months passed,i have not found the job
3:i am interesting in. jast sunday morning,i received a
4：phone call from a man naming mr.wang.he said on
5：the phone,"i hear you do well on your
6 studies.i may offer with a beating
7:heart.how i wished i will go through the job-hunting
8:talk and he would take on me as a
9：to my surprised,his words made me disappointed.
10：that he needed was only a model
10句改错 其中有一句是正确的

这也太多了 吧 你最好自已学习 之后在自己去解决

Dear:

I am Hua Li,I came from the inland of china XXXX province XXXX city who English name is XXX. Male and age is 22 years old. Graduated from XXXX university in July 2008, Major in engineering of chemistry. I am now seeking a job what it can challenge me to a higher condition .Here below is the profile of mine.
General Advantages
 Honest, active, open-minded.,Self-motivated.
 Strong learning aspiration, willing to work under pressure.
 Good command of Ms. office automatic software, such as: word, Excel,Outlook ext.
 Although I havn’t join the testing of CET-4, but more important I can communicate with overseas buyer with English .

I known you company is looking for Volunteers, I think that my conditions can meet your requirement . Taking this opportunity, I try to submit my Resume both in English for your review, I am looking forward to hear good news for interview.