correct one sentence, i'm waiting on line

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/02 06:50:34
One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students anttend university for a good job, 25 percent for interesting, 3 percent accounding to their parents.

这句话有什么错误？如何修改更native?

总体不错，稍作修改。attend 和 according to替换了下，
One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students admitted university for a good job, 25 percent for interest, 3 percent for their parents.

文中有几处错误，已改正：
One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students attend university for a good job, 25 percent for(interest), 3 percent according to their parents.

错误在于不能用interesting，而应该用名词interest

One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students attend university for a good job, 25 percent for interest, 3 percent according to their parents.
更正应该是interest，你吧according拼写错了吧！

Interesting是形容词 应该用名词interest