correct mistakes ?

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i want to go to bed after lunch .but i must write a diary .because it is necessary to do myhomework .i thought doing well in english is too hard,as my basis very poor .
i recognized a man whose name is nanguo .he run a small a factary which produce clothing in the city of tazhou .on internet .,we chatted about jib, reading ,plan tied ,he invited me to spend weeked ,but i must think of this thing .,i am waiting for him on OICQ but he couldnt come from then ,i dont what he was doing ,

这是我的看法，有些地方不连贯，我改了一下，希望你能看明白.Good luck!

I want to go to bed after my lunch.But I must write a diary first because it is part of my homework.I think it is hard to do well in english as my basis of English very poor .
I know a man whose name is Nanguo. He runs a small a clothing-factory in the city of Tazhou.We chatted about job, reading and plan tied online.He invited me to spend this weekend with him ,but i should think of this thing before I give him my answer.But he is like disappeared since then as I couldn't see him on OICQ.I don't know what happen to him.

i had wanted to go to bed after lunch,but i had to write a diray.Beacause it`s necessary to finish my homework.i thought that doing well in English was too hard to me for my poor english foundation.
i knew a men whose name is Nanguo.he ran a small factory which produced clothes in the city of Tazhou.

o......rubbish.....f*ck

他说纠正错误啊先生。。。。

正确的错误 ?
想要在午餐之后上床