关于玩电脑的弊病的英语短文

这样行不？
The Internet is fast and convenient. Many people use it to look for jobs, gain knowledge and do a lot of things. Without the Internet, we will not be able to complete many tasks. For example, if I want to send someone an important picture but I do not have Internet access, that person will not receive the picture on time because normal post may take much longer, while sending an email only takes a few seconds.

Now,more and more people want to catch up with the morden life.As the people konw,internet is at the top of the centure.we could use it for many factions.computers could hepl people to communicate with others and help us know about the other places.In the past,if we wanted to talk with others ,even someone has something important to argue with his friends,but they were far from him,as the reason,he would lose the charce. we also could learn something that we can't know aroud us.
but if we play too much frome it with the internet,it is waste of o