这2句写的有错吗?

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①I had bought a new watch.after two days,The watch had stopped and had been repaired.so I had no money.
②He had lived here for long time.before long,he had sold this house when he left.

如果有错的话说明下错误原因..并修改下.ths!
发现都是一个错误..类似 before long 这样向后推移的时间 为什么后面都不能用过去完成时呢 而都改成过去时? 我想表示说这些个动作 对于那个时间而言都完成了 不行吗? 不解....

①I had bought a new watch.after two days,The watch stopped and was repaired.so I had no money.
②He had lived here for a long time,and later he sold this house when he left.

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错很多了..

1. I bought a new watch. after two days, the watch stopped, but it had been repaired. so i had no money

2. he had been living here for a long time, however, he sould his house when he left

两句的时态都有问题,如果没有太多要求,我改为如下两句。
1,i bought a new watch two days ago, but the watch stoped and i had to repaired it, so i have no money.
2, he had lived here for a long time, before long he had sold this house when left.