帮我检查检查这篇短文有没有语法错误

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One day, Tom and his mother together in the shopping, because Tom actually not like shopping, so mother said: "Tom, I know you do not like to accompany me shopping, but if you accompany me shopping, I'll promise you one thing. "Tom certainly do not miss this good opportunity, he said to his mother:" Mom, I have to wear shoes almost broken, please buy me a pair of a better bar! "Mom thought for a while, said:" Well , OK! "
这个是我在Google翻译上翻译的，害怕有语法错误，因为要交给老师，所以请各位大大检查一下！

问题有够多，太中化了
One day, Tom and his mother were shopping. Tom don't like shopping,so his mother told him that she would buy a gift for him if he could stay with her. Tom told himself that he couldn't miss the good chance, so he sait to his mother: "Mom, my shoes is worn-out,please buy me a pair of new shoes." Mom thought for a while and agreed my request.