帮忙看下我的这段中翻英的英语部分有没错误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/27 11:33:44
原文：我国作为世界上最大的纺织品出口商，具备了成本、价格、产业配套设施等优势。在面临人民币升值的压力下，人民币升值对我国纺织业出口造成了许多消极影响，包括利润减少、竞争力削弱、市场份额丢失等。这种情况下，为了保持我国纺织业的持久竞争力和稳固纺织业出口的地位，我国纺织业要提出适当的对策，提升产品附加值、海外投资建厂等来减少人民币升值所带来的危害；同时，通过这些对策，让我国的纺织业除了拥有传统的出口优势外，在新的形势和条件下，拥有更符合这个时代竞争的其他优势。

翻译：China is the biggest exporter of textile in the world,possessing the advantage of costs,price,industrial supporting facilities and so on.Confronted with the appreciation of RMB, which made great negative impact to our export of textile industry,including profit shrinkage,less competitiveness and market share.Under this situation,in order to maintain our competitiveness longer and strengthen the status of textile in export,we have to take some measures,such as increasing the product’s value,offshore sourcing to diminish the destruction of appreciation.Besides,by these ways,not only had we owned the traditional vantage of export in textile ,but also we obtained superior methods suited for this era in the new circumstance.
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As the biggest exporter of textile in the world,Chinese textile industry possesses the advantages of costs,price,industrial supporting facilities and so on.But now we are under high pressure of the appreciation of RMB,which made great negative impacts, including profit shrinkage,less competitiveness and market share.Under this situation,we have to take some measures,such as increasing the product’s value,offshore sourcing to diminish the destruction of appreciation to maintain our competitiveness longer and strengthen the status of textile in export.Besides,by these ways,not only had we owned the traditional vantage of export in textile ,but also we obtained superior methods suited for this era in the new circumstance.

在面临人民币升值的压力下，人民币升值 ----有点重复