请帮忙翻译我女儿的短文

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烦请翻译成英文 我的小女儿准备参加英语口语大赛 是我自己起的稿 有不好的地方请帮忙指正 多谢

嗨 大家好 我叫顾安琪 英文名字叫做安周(谐音天使的意思)我是个活泼开朗的小女孩 我五岁了 我的英语老师是何老师 我非常喜欢她 因为她在上课时总是能带给我们很多的笑声 每堂英语课我都觉得很快乐 所以我也非常喜欢英语

第一人称太多显得很傲慢

Hello everyone!

I am Gu Anqi,a 5 years old lovely girl.

my English name is Angel.

our English teacher is Miss He,

she make us very happy in every class.

that's why i like english so much

小孩子口语尽量使用简单词汇

Hello everyone!

I am Gu Anqi

My english name is Anzhou(is the meaning of angel)

I am a lively and sonsy girl , I am five.

My english teacher is Teacher He, I like her very much.

Because she always makes us laugh on class.
(Because she always fills the classroom with laugh)

I feel very happy in every class,

so I like English very much.

HI, everybody!

My name is Gu Anqi, and my English name is Angel.

I'm a cheerful girl. And I'm 5 years old.

My English teacher is Mr/Miss He.

I like him/her ervery much.

Because he/she always carries muc