英语诗创作与翻译

三年前，我遇见了你，给了你一个承诺；
three year ago, i run into you, and left you a promise
三年后，你会忘记我吗？会忘记那个承诺吗？
three years past, will you still keep me on your mind, also that promise?
三年后，世界将会变成什么样子......
three years later, what is the world going to be?
三年，看似遥远，却又近在咫尺......
three years never been far away, they're beside you and me ..

给点背景资料，你们要离别了，以后再不见了；还是有转机什么的．．．

I met you and gave,
you a promise three years ago
Have you forgotten
and left me in sorrow?
What will the world become in three years,
It appears distant,
Yet curiously near.

硬译:

我认识你并
给了你一个承诺三年前
你是不是忘记了
并将我留在伤心(遗憾)中?
世界将会变成什么样子......
看似遥远
却好奇的接近

如果"三年"重复太多遍, 会影响诗意

The whole poem.

Three years ago,
Destiny joined us by her mighty hands,
A Promise was delivered to you by my solemn oath.
Three years have flowed away.
Am I still alive i