帮忙改改语法错误!或者有更好的说法。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/22 09:37:23
I will teach them based my heart, passion and patience. I often use many materials like pictures, word cards and so on in my lessons. I always try my best to reach each child. Stories, chants, songs are all good for little kids. I have my students practise English as a whole class, group work, pair work or independent work.

第一句base后面必须加on
第2句这样写更好些
In my lessons i often use many materials just like pictures word cards and so on.第3句可以这样写更有感情色彩 I am always trying my best 这样写更加夸张的说自己超乎常人了 别人所做不到的 be always doing 表示不正常 非常投入 尽自己最大努力要知道你是最棒的这句首先表达自己很自信I am always trying my best to closed little kids , which is telling storise chanting singing and all of the little kids like to do. 最后一句不能这样说变种方式就更好了English Practise as a whole class exercise ,group exercise,couple exercise and independent exercise.
好好改改吧 有什么问题再问我
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base 后面要加on
reach在这里用法不对。换个说法吧。
我觉得你重新写吧。基本上句子都不是很通顺,如果你要用这个去应聘的话,你一定会失败的。