这样写对吗..有错吗

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Hello!Everybody.My name is ***.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family.It's my mother ,my father and I.My father is a ***(你爸爸的职业），He likes read books.My mother is a teacher,She works very hard.I'm a student.I'm **(你的年龄）years old.I love my family!
good morning everyone.my name is Susan.i have a happy family.we lives in Quanzhou.i have two grandmather and two grandfather.i have no brother.my father and my mather are boss.they works very hard.i love my family..大家看看有没有问题..后面突然说我爱这个家应该不会太突然吧.i want to study very well for english ..有错吗因为我想出国怎么说..

It's改they are

right
Hello,everyone!My name is ***.I have a happy family.There are three people，my mother ,my father and I.My father is a ***(你爸爸的职业），he likes reading books.My mother is a teacher,she works very hard.I'm a student.I'm **(你的年龄）years old.I love my family!

改为I feel happy in my family.He like reading books.
happy不可以直接作定语形容family
表示爱好，用like doing 形式

Hello!Everybody.My name is ***.I have a happy family.There are three person in my family.It's my mother ,my father and me.My father is a ***(你爸爸的职业）.He likes reading book.My mother is a teacher.She works very hard.I'm a student and **(你的年龄）years old this year.I love my family!

Hello!Everybody.My name is ***.I have a happy family.There are three people in my family,(前面句号改逗号，去掉it's！三个‘人’不可以说it) my mother ,my father and I.My father is a ***(你爸爸的职业），He likes reading(like doing sth，表示长期喜欢做某事) books.My mother is a teacher,She works very hard.I'm a student.I'm