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自己写的。问题题目是sleepless night.请帮忙检查一下语法、用词等方面的问题。谢谢。

Sleepless night

The curtain of night has fallen. The night has never been in such silence and stillness before. In the dead of night, there was a 9-year-old girl named Dawn, lying on the thick grass. She got nowhere to stay this night as her home has been destroyed by the tsunami.

Numerous stars were twinkling distantly in the sky. ‘Might this indicate that it would be a sunny day tomorrow?’ The little girl wondered. It was late in the night. She just wanted to have a dream, a beautiful, calm dream. But she could not; she was even not able to close her eyes. Anyway, who would have the ability to fall asleep after such a grave disaster?

In order to help herself to fall asleep, Dawn started to count sheep. One, two, three…… Until a male sheep has got married to a female sheep and two baby lambs have born, the little girl still could not fall asleep. She was as awake as her memory of yesterday. S

Sleepless night

The curtain of night has fallen. The night has never before been in such silence and stillness. In the dead of night, there was a 9-year-old girl named Dawn, lying on the thick grass. She got nowhere to stay this night as her home has been destroyed by the tsunami.

Numerous stars were twinkling distantly in the sky. ‘Might this indicate that it would be a sunny day tomorrow?’ The little girl wondered. It was late in the night. She just wanted to have a dream, a beautiful, peaceful dream. But she could not; she was not even able to close her eyes. Anyway, who would be able to fall asleep after such a grave disaster?

In order to help herself to fall asleep, Dawn started to count sheep. One, two, three…… Until a male sheep has got married to a female one and two baby lambs were given birth to, the little girl still could not fall asleep. She was as awake as her memory of yesterday. So she gave up struggling eventually, but let her mem